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Sunday, November 18, 2012

This is a poem written by an 11 year old online student of mine. His name is Sohum and he lives in Australia.I was trying to get him to discipline his writing and decided poetry would help. I suggested he read some of the War Poets like Owen, Brooke and Sassoon, which he did, and this is what he came up with within a few minutes! I don't think he copied anyone, he was simply inspired by the rage and sadness in the poems. I have polished it a little- a very little- not because he could not have done the editing himself, but because being 11 he gets fidgetty  and types carelessly.I have his and his dad's permission to publish his poem in my blog. This poem could easily be put to music. Its like a song-lyric and the melancholy refrain reminds me of Danny Boy.

Untitled poem by Sohum Jain

Falling snow
drifts so slow
like raindrops
Soldier boy come home

Bells are chiming
Mother waits
Father waits
on bended knees
Come home
Come home

Comforting
Praying
for you for you
Soldier boy come home
Come to your mother's arms
Soldier boy mother waits
for you for you

Father comforts
through sleepless nights
repeating Son, don't die,
God,  I believe in you
Drowning himself in beer
father cries
sobbing until he sleeps
In the morning 
the tears
still as fresh as dew

Mother  locked away
in a stony wall of silence
speaking to no one
as if bound by 
invisible ropes

Father talks of glory
fearing the worst
hoping for the best
Soldier boy come home

Soldier boy come home
blood covers the battlefield
bullets strike home
Pray to God
ask him for strength
ask Him to return you home

Comrades falling one by one
blood like a field
of crimson roses
bullets whizzing past
bombs whistling down
Your mother misses you
wants to welcome you
in her arms
Soldier boy come home